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Tenma - Betrayed by rekka-alexiel Tenma - Betrayed by rekka-alexiel
No, that's not blush... Read below. =D

I've been attempting to write my first screenplay, which is really fanfiction written in the form of a script. So far it's been going pretty well (for my first try) and I'm really liking the story. It's an Akane X Tenma pairing story (I'm a shipper, too!) which takes places toward the end of the Haruka 1 time arc. Akram, the main baddie, sends one of his henchmen to use an onryou (vengeful spirit) to steal the soul of the Ryuujin no Miko aka Akane... but what they don't anticipate is that once summoned, the onryou has a mind and will of its own. It's commanded to attack Akane, but it looks at her and is rather disinterested. lol It ends up swallowing Tenma's soul instead.

This pic is during a scene when Tenma's in an in between sort of place, "the void". In the original Haruka 1 story, there's a moment when Shimon, one of Tenma's friends, is being harrassed by two bullies at school and Tenma comes to his rescue. While Tenma's in this void, he relives this moment... only when he beats up the two bullies, Shimon punches him. Apparently in this reality, Shimon and the other two bullies are friends. Then Akane and Tenma's sister appear and start saying really mean things to him... It's sad because...well, Tenma really likes Akane. =( So not only is he betrayed by his friend and sister but...also the one he loves.

Anyway, I actually used a pic of Tenma from the 3rd manga to help me draw this right and I think it turned out okay. ^^; This is certainly a better Tenma pic than my last one. heehee Click the link below to find the script.

Morimura Tenma
Harukanaru Toki no Naka de
Character by Mizuno Tooko
Artwork by Rekka Alexiel 2005
Fan Script: "Breath of Darkness"
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tina-kun Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2005
I love his expression. Seeing him blush makes me blush as well. :blush:
rekka-alexiel Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
heehee, thanks, glad you like it. But alas, it's not blush. He got smacked in the face. Poor boy... :(
tina-kun Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2005
Awww, now I love him even more. :heart:
rekka-alexiel Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
heehee I'm glad! He could use all the love he could get in my script.... I really need to write more of it... *sigh*
laernath Featured By Owner May 18, 2005
He looks so shocked/hurt! I love the way you did the eyes and eyelids!
The little blush is soooo cute!!!
His lips parted just a bit, makes it look like he's gasping in pain (or about to get kissed!).
Nice color choices! All warm and fuzzy, so hugable! :hug:
rekka-alexiel Featured By Owner May 18, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
heehee The sad scenes are always the most beautiful, aren't they? I'm so mean! But anyway, that little bit of red on his face is where Shimon punches him. =P Shimon is like three years younger than Tenma...and is kinda a wuss, so add it all up to create an instant of utter disbelief. Fun fun fun pic to draw/color. I should scan the actual pic that I used as a guide just for you to see. Tenma's so purdy! Mizuno-sensei needs to start writing more about him again!!! There've been 9 volumes of the Harukanaru manga so far and the last major stuff she wrote about him was back in volume 3! *GRRR* She's NOT making us Tenma fans happy! lol

Anyway, thanks for the comments!! :glomp:
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